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If only, if only the Woodpecker sighed, and the Wolf cries to the Moon,

The Moon alone in the sky,
the pack not answering, no stars to join the moon in watching the earthly splendor,
the Wolf left on his own, shunned from his world.

The Moon left to her lonesome person, glowing orange, given a mournful keening to her ears, seen a wolf abandoned, "Not so different Wolf, you and I, I and you."

The wolf drifts through the forest, trying to run from his past, his memories that torment him.
All the while, the Moon watches on, self-absorbed in misery, glad for the light veil of fog, and lower mist.

The Wolf wishing that someone would acknowledge or notice him, he felt as if an omnipotent being had erased him from the world, passing others by as if he were an ant.

The Moon watched on till morn, when they both laid to rest on misery, contemplating their past and why they were cursed to this short existence, which had yielded more misfortune then bliss.

Both hoping for a better, happier form and life in their reincarnation.
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like i said in my journal, this is the poem i had to make for the play Trifles. like my first poem, plz critique it via my comment page, and hope u like it!!

Comments


:iconleavinglasvegasalone:
This is sad but nice

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you're always so far away </3
:icondeathdog394:
thx, so any changes u would make?
:iconfunismyway:
wow this is really deap! i think you will DEFENANTALY make the try outs!!XD cause this is a good poem!!<3

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KAKUHIDAN IS DA SHPLITZ!!! <3 XD

'he/she is has fallen upwards'

PRAISE CLUCKY!! XD

*I AM SO UKE!!*

<3 I LOVE YOU WITH A PASSION<3
:iconleavinglasvegasalone:
I don't really know because I'm not that good at writing poems that don't rhyme.

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you're always so far away </3
:icondeathdog394:
thx and i did...know i have to perform it in front of our high school and if i do good the town's 4th of july festival...yikes
:icondeathdog394:
k, thx anyway and hav u tried? its quite easy, just find something to write about and begin by rhyming and then switch to book style while staying as close the begining as u can
:iconfunismyway:
dont worry every one will really love it!!<3 if you can think of this i know you can handle saying it infront of a crowd!!<3

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KAKUHIDAN IS DA SHPLITZ!!! <3 XD

'he/she is has fallen upwards'

PRAISE CLUCKY!! XD

*I AM SO UKE!!*

<3 I LOVE YOU WITH A PASSION<3
:iconleavinglasvegasalone:
I've tried but it was forced for class so bleh. tnx I'll try again when I feel creative tho

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you're always so far away </3
:icondeathdog394:
lol, ya i do most of my work for classes...so ya i can yet cant agree.
:icondeathdog394:
thx...i'll let u know how it goes

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